As She Cradled Her Child

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Mom cradled the moment
as she cradled her child, 
at sixteen silent words .. spoken

A lullaby through weeping red tears   
as she cradled her child, 
hope in his honey brown eyes fears

Melting her soul with pleading eyes
as she cradled her child, 
where hugs of love never to rise

Echoes of  lull empty heart tears brought forth
as she cradled her child, 
eyes closed rocking back and forth at his birth

Song sung blue one more time do flow
as she cradled her child, 
birthday cake and wishes, lilies grow

7/2/2016

not for contest  inspired by Julia Ward  Cradling the Moment - Poetry Contest
and her poem;Mamma
 
 http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/mamma_804806

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/15/2016 2:50:00 PM
A deep heart touching poem my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/14/2016 8:47:00 AM
Eve,I am touched with your lovely expression. Congrats n love.
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:45:00 PM
Lovely poem Eve, .......with the sad, and tragic tenderness of motherly love !!
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Date: 7/13/2016 1:02:00 AM
Eve, this was heartfelt, :(--- Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for the support. Stop by and enjoy the sanity of my newest Blog "In Red's Silent Fury." Always & Forever WUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:08:00 AM
My heart feels sick at this knowledge nd of sorrow...both poem and photo left me weeping. So profound. One of your best Eve! 7 ;
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/9/2016 4:10:00 AM
My kindle is driving me nuts...it keeps changing my words...this kind of sorrow. Sorry, I forgot to double check it.
Date: 7/6/2016 10:01:00 AM
A mothers love holds no bounds.....such a harrowing photo of mans inhumanity to man. You captured the words beautifully in your wonderful poem.
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Date: 7/4/2016 3:06:00 AM
Oh this is so sad:( The picture too:( The refrain made the poem more effective, Eve:) Well written:)
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Date: 7/3/2016 12:18:00 PM
Very sad well written very emotional x good words x
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Date: 7/3/2016 9:34:00 AM
- Who can read this without crying ....... heartbreaking ... but, beautifully written dear Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2016 2:37:00 PM
- It makes me deeply sad to hear it was a true story ..... poor mother, bless her heart <3
Date: 7/2/2016 11:02:00 PM
Very emotional, so sad, but I kept my tears in check. Great expression of maternal love and heartbreak, Eve. CayCay
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