As My Daily Meals Revolve

I like a healthy breakfast.
Green smoothie or toast?
Any doubt?

I choose where to eat my lunch.
Which do I like most?
In or out?

I fix my hubby dinner.
Casserole or roast?
Which to tout?



For Dr. Ram Mehta's QUINZAINE CONTEST Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Babcock Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Nice one will keep my comments short as i am so behind in reading. Have had a busy summer will send you a note soon. love phyl
Onclaud Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:35 PM
i like the energ of this string, andie.. cheers for your winning streak.. huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on your HM. In your middle stanza, at first I thought you were speaking of the In 'N Out burger place. I haven't had a burger in 26 years now, but I remember how good they were.
Sergi Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Hi Andrea: Congratulations on your win. I liked all three of them
A   Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Andrea, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Beautiful write ,,, Congrats on win Andrea! Thanks for checking syllables of mine ,, credits to u for my win too,,, many thanks !!
Mehta Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:53 AM
Thanks for your support and congrats on the win in my contest, andrea
May Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea....
Walker  Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Nice.. Congratulation on winning... Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Simple yet mesmerising ! It's the creativity that makes u the best ! Congrats Andrea loved the write !
Susan Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:23 AM
your title makes me think of days of our lives. "as my daily meals revolve, so do the days of our lives..." ha ha ha. this is a cute one - congrats on your wins with it!
A   Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Andrea, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda
Pennington Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 4:17 PM
ROAST I SAY! POTATOES, ONIONS AND CARROTS. TENDER AND JUICY A BIT BLOOD RED. I LOVE IT! MY TAKE ON CHOICES WELL VERSED.
Johnson Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 9:05 PM
I'll have a broiled trout.
X- Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 2:13 PM
A wonderful verse Andrea, good luck. DX
Sirak Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 8:19 AM
You can even write great poetry about food! I may be rambling here, but your meals made me think of the food pyramid, and now I am wondering...is there a poetry pyramid?
Melugin Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 6:53 AM
Food for thought! I think a lot of this poem. 7 Got any leftovers Andrea? my best, chuck
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 4:03 AM
Best of luck in the competition. A lovely warm poem about life's essentials, with a dash of love. Great read.
Tello Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 10:21 PM
Makes me hungry... Hope you win!! (Thanks for the advice)
Anish Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 8:48 PM
How about some egg whites with tomato for breakfast - that is what I usually have. Tasty work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 8:56 AM
I am going for blood work today so I am fasting. Now I am even more hungry after reading your poem *lol*
Sivey Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 8:42 AM
Interesting approach to the contest, I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem here this morning! What a brilliant piece my friend, Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 6:25 AM
Yes, my thoughts are definitely concrete just a few floating breezy morsels..Reads like a winner even though I do not know what it is about..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 5:25 AM
Ohhh very clever verse - a sure fire winner with me as it involves food lol good luck with the contest. Jan xx
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