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As My Daily Meals Revolve

I like a healthy breakfast.
Green smoothie or toast?
Any doubt?

I choose where to eat my lunch.
Which do I like most?
In or out?

I fix my hubby dinner.
Casserole or roast?
Which to tout?



For Dr. Ram Mehta's QUINZAINE CONTEST Poetry Contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/13/2014 11:44:00 AM

Nice one will keep my comments short as i am so behind in reading. Have had a busy summer will send you a note soon. love phyl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2014 4:35:00 PM

i like the energ of this string, andie.. cheers for your winning streak.. huggs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/21/2014 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM. In your middle stanza, at first I thought you were speaking of the In 'N Out burger place. I haven't had a burger in 26 years now, but I remember how good they were.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/20/2014 6:26:00 PM

Hi Andrea: Congratulations on your win. I liked all three of them

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 12:31:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/20/2014 11:23:00 AM

Beautiful write ,,, Congrats on win Andrea! Thanks for checking syllables of mine ,, credits to u for my win too,,, many thanks !!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/20/2014 9:53:00 AM

Thanks for your support and congrats on the win in my contest, andrea

Joseph May

Date: 4/20/2014 9:12:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea....

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/20/2014 8:58:00 AM

Nice.. Congratulation on winning... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/10/2014 10:50:00 AM

Simple yet mesmerising ! It's the creativity that makes u the best ! Congrats Andrea loved the write !

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/10/2014 8:23:00 AM

your title makes me think of days of our lives. "as my daily meals revolve, so do the days of our lives..." ha ha ha. this is a cute one - congrats on your wins with it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2014 8:49:00 PM

Andrea, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda

David Pennington

Date: 4/9/2014 4:17:00 PM

ROAST I SAY! POTATOES, ONIONS AND CARROTS. TENDER AND JUICY A BIT BLOOD RED. I LOVE IT! MY TAKE ON CHOICES WELL VERSED.

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/3/2014 9:05:00 PM

I'll have a broiled trout.

Dom- X-

Date: 4/3/2014 2:13:00 PM

A wonderful verse Andrea, good luck. DX

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/3/2014 8:19:00 AM

You can even write great poetry about food! I may be rambling here, but your meals made me think of the food pyramid, and now I am wondering...is there a poetry pyramid?

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/3/2014 6:53:00 AM

Food for thought! I think a lot of this poem. 7 Got any leftovers Andrea? my best, chuck

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/3/2014 4:03:00 AM

Best of luck in the competition. A lovely warm poem about life's essentials, with a dash of love. Great read.

Jesus Tello

Date: 4/2/2014 10:21:00 PM

Makes me hungry... Hope you win!! (Thanks for the advice)

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/2/2014 8:48:00 PM

How about some egg whites with tomato for breakfast - that is what I usually have. Tasty work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/2/2014 8:56:00 AM

I am going for blood work today so I am fasting. Now I am even more hungry after reading your poem *lol*

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/2/2014 8:42:00 AM

Interesting approach to the contest, I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem here this morning! What a brilliant piece my friend, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2014 6:25:00 AM

Yes, my thoughts are definitely concrete just a few floating breezy morsels..Reads like a winner even though I do not know what it is about..Thanks for stopping by..Sara