as long as I see the sky

as long as I see the sky ~ something about my eyes will cringe at guys…
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Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 10:06 AM
Congrats, Lioness. Good to see your monoku finally
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 6:22 AM
- Congratulations on your winning line :) -
mysore Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 7:01 PM
congratulations dear poet. humor write it is. cheers.
Empress Avatar
November 6, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Good lord, why do you keep cringing papi! Hahah you never run out of humor do you! I love this, so very you! And the internal rhymes are brilliant! Syllables too on point! Good to see you write for a contest! Best wishes!
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