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as long as I see the sky

as long as I see the sky ~ something about my eyes will cringe at guys…

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 10:06:00 AM

Congrats, Lioness. Good to see your monoku finally

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:22:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line :) -

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 7:01:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. humor write it is. cheers.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/6/2024 9:46:00 AM

Good lord, why do you keep cringing papi! Hahah you never run out of humor do you! I love this, so very you! And the internal rhymes are brilliant! Syllables too on point! Good to see you write for a contest! Best wishes!