Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

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As Liquid Fire Melts

As liquid fire melts with twinkling sunshine in your eyes, 
Opening wings now embrace deeply all of my true emotions.

Feeling the warmth of your beating heart now fluttering so,
I see a radiant chain of daisies growing in the deep green grass.
 
Every choice I have ever made throughout my long life,
Has led me now to you at this very special moment in time. 

Beholding ivory silk starlight whispers of Heavenly angels true, 
I have now a clear vision of my life, my fate, and my destiny. 

Becoming the richest person in this giant, lonely world—
Means finding you and sharing our love unconditionally.

All real emotions we have beholding in this life of ours,
Are part of that God-given sensitivity from the Almighty.

Truly, as liquid fire melts beyond in great stars of the cosmos,
I think of you, our love, and the starlight whispers of angels true!

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – April 21, 2016
(Unrhymed Couplet)

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Gary Bateman May 1, 2016 at 7:02 PM Hello Liam Mate!! Glad you got this one posted. It is truly fun, and a very great pleasure that both of us are back together working on some really great poetic themes. "As Liquid Fire Melts" is a prime example of our continuing supreme collaboration on key poetic themes and writes. ALL THE BEST . . . Gary

Casarah Nance May 1, 2016 at 2:05 PM Wonderful mix of ink! well done Liam and Gary, a great collaboration.

Dorian Petersen Potter May 1, 2016 at 12:52 PM Hi Liam n' Gary !:))This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Wow!Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A Fav!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2016 at 12:15 PM - Pleased to read this today - A beautiful poem filled with love and warm feelings, Liam - A pleasure two see you co write again my dear friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)