As Is Moment

come back,turn back..miss you so
         did you have to go
hold on..wait..,stand still...please show


Inspired by Seashell's Solstice contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 8:34 PM
Brian - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ
Reynolds Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 2:52 AM
Congrats on your win in SI's contest Brian, may peace be with you always, love Kristin
Fawcett Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 12:28 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Best, Nigel
Heck Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 11:23 PM
Dear Brian - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations Brian on your win in the Winter solstice contest! Excellent! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 6:00 PM
I really loved this one! Congratulations Brian for your excellent winning poem. Very best of the holiday season to all of you, our friends across the ocean! Love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 12:40 PM
A unique twist. You are so creative. Good luck in the contest! I had to smile at your comment on my Haiku. Just so you know "cope" is the key word for me, and barely. ~lol~ Thanks for all your support. Love, Shar
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October 29, 2008 at 7:37 AM
I am thinking why did the sun have to leave us so soon and bring this cold of misery upon us. Lovely write Brian. read it a few times. Very clever.
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