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As Is Moment

come back,turn back..miss you so did you have to go hold on..wait..,stand still...please show Inspired by Seashell's Solstice contest

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Michael Jordan

Date: 12/23/2008 8:34:00 PM

Brian - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/23/2008 2:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win in SI's contest Brian, may peace be with you always, love Kristin

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/23/2008 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Best, Nigel

John Heck

Date: 12/22/2008 11:23:00 PM

Dear Brian - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/22/2008 7:01:00 PM

Congratulations Brian on your win in the Winter solstice contest! Excellent! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/22/2008 6:00:00 PM

I really loved this one! Congratulations Brian for your excellent winning poem. Very best of the holiday season to all of you, our friends across the ocean! Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/29/2008 12:40:00 PM

A unique twist. You are so creative. Good luck in the contest! I had to smile at your comment on my Haiku. Just so you know "cope" is the key word for me, and barely. ~lol~ Thanks for all your support. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/29/2008 7:37:00 AM

I am thinking why did the sun have to leave us so soon and bring this cold of misery upon us. Lovely write Brian. read it a few times. Very clever.