Aditi Mishra Poet Verse

As If We Never Said Goodbye

Charcoal brush adorning sparkling bristles of love
weaves patterns on canvas of blank memory
flashing waves entrancing visions of kisses alight
blankets of amnesia in existence but he paints
hustling vintage platform emerging from mists
breeze in lover's red shirt chasing scarlet sunsets
he boards a crimson wagon longing for a goodbye



June 21, 2020

ON BROADWAY Poetry Contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Title: As If We Never Said Goodbye
~Winner: 4th Place

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Sam Kauffman August 23, 2020 at 1:16 PM A plaintive cry from a yearning heart, Aditi. I always look forward to your imagery that is not just creative but remains in the heart. Congratulations!

John Watt July 8, 2020 at 7:37 PM A lovely romantic write, Aditi. I love your sprinkling in gentle hints of painting: bristles, charcoal, canvas, paint. You have inspired me to try doing something of the like. More fabulous poetry from your platinum pen, I can't seem to get enough! You are a blessing, my friend ~ John Aditi Mishra July 9, 2020 at 1:03 AM I am really thankful to your for visiting this muse and blessing me with your valuable review. Glad you love my words dear friend! Thank you for being a constant source of inspiration :)

Kai Michael Neumann June 23, 2020 at 5:59 AM Wonderful sentiments ... Aditi Mishra June 23, 2020 at 7:30 AM Thank you for your wishes Kai :)

Caren Krutsinger June 22, 2020 at 7:08 PM Your imagery poetically expressed so beautifully! Well penned! Aditi Mishra June 23, 2020 at 2:00 AM Thank you for your kind appreciation Caren :) God bless you

Edward Ibeh June 21, 2020 at 7:04 PM Whew, this poignant gem brought a tear to my eyes as it hits a little too close to home for me, Aditi. Magnificent, as usual! GL on Nette's contest, my friend! Aditi Mishra June 22, 2020 at 9:58 AM I am glad my words resonate with your emotions Edward! Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation. God bless you :)

Silent One June 21, 2020 at 2:04 PM A lot of darkness in this goodbye... I could feel the sadness.. Aditi Mishra June 22, 2020 at 9:58 AM Thank you for absorbing my words :) Really honored by your visit. God bless you