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as if in a dream, for Jorika

we meet every night in spirit form (as if in a dream) to embrace the flame of love burning between us and then wake up even to forget to hug each other

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Date: 11/16/2024 4:41:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Kgosietsile Dintlhoane
Date: 11/18/2024 12:07:00 AM
Thank You! Beata, i really appreciate your encouraging words, may your pen never run dry.

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