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As I Walk Upon the Ground

Poem for my late husband Jerry---2011------As I walk upon the ground--by charlotte As I walk upon the ground you lay beneath but make no sound with no shoes upon my feet I think of our life we once had visiting your grave site still makes me feel so sad As the stars shine upon you every night I think about what my life with out you is now like As I place a Flower upon your grave my thoughts of you in my head will always be saved As once again I must turn and leave Jerry my new life without you is getting easier but that doesn't mean I don't still miss you and I don't still still grieve Byee for now untill we meet again you'll aways be in my heart my husband and my best friend As I walk upon the ground you lay beneath but make no sound,,,,

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John Fleming

Date: 1/1/2015 12:24:00 PM

Beautiful heart rendering poem, Sharlotte! :) john.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2014 9:26:00 PM

an awesome free verse poem, Sharlotte, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2014 4:06:00 AM

- Welcome to P - Soup, Sharlotte !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/22/2014 1:36:00 AM

simply heartbreaking Sharlotte my heart goes out to you - you must miss him oh so much - I love the power of the repeated lines As I walk upon the ground you lay beneath but make no sound,but this makes me oh so sad to read:-( Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2015 1:04:00 AM

I started writing in February and also used to sleep with paper by me or simply HAVE to get up and write - its a little better now but I always carry my notebook round with me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sharlotte Newan
Date: 1/4/2015 9:30:00 PM

I dream some of my poems. If I am upset or happy I can not control my poetry it just come to me. I always keep paper by my bed. Thank you all for your kind words.