As I Run

As I run.
I begin to think.
Minds become in sync.
We all fall, One day we all raise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 14, 2016 at 1:50 PM
peter avalos, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Peter, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 2:01 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Peter. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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