Robert Lindley Poet Rhyme

As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon

As I Hold Her Under This, Merciful God's Moon


Her heart sang, the tune broke my lost song
 life without her, how did I ever get along
Clouds once loomed over my every long day
 before she made me bow and silently pray

Please keep this dream in my lost life
 remove painful sting and life filled with strife
Let her dance and sing another sweet tune
 as I hold her under this, merciful God's moon

Hold time back as I find a miracle now
 give me wisdom to find out just how
To win her heart to join with this lost soul
 her love and life is my blessed newfound goal

I pray that this new branch bears sweet fruits
 as we seal our fate and our tree sets firm roots!

12,05, 2014

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Shadow Hamilton July 27, 2015 at 6:03 AM great pen Robert congrats on win hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2015 at 2:32 AM Yet another exquisite poetry and superb win Robert! Big congrats!

Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 4:55 PM a very touching write Robert - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 4:33 PM Robert, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**

Gary Bateman December 8, 2014 at 2:24 PM Robert, Most Outstanding!! This rhymed sonnet is quite touching and most emotive. I agree with Paul Callus about the closing couplet. It's quite beautiful and the imagery you use portrays a most compelling message of oneness and affirmation. Another 7+++++ and a definite FAV!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 6, 2014 at 11:43 PM I am touched by the love and beauty you created under God's moon! Lovely words, Robert! Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus December 6, 2014 at 3:19 PM Your words are very touching, Robert. True love can inspire beautiful sentiments and poetic inspiration. Love your closing couplet. #7 // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans December 6, 2014 at 10:10 AM A beautiful peaceful poem Robert. I feel your love and open you can bear those sweet fruits.

Monterey Sirak December 6, 2014 at 7:59 AM Lovely and emotional. I like the image of love being a branch bearing fruit

Sara Kendrick December 6, 2014 at 6:12 AM Enjoyed reading your sonnet this morning..Very moving lines..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 6, 2014 at 1:42 AM Great rhyming n a wonderful write Robert! God bless you n ur love!