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You are such a tool go back to school they yelled at him without hindsight You got nothing between your ears pack it up Joe, walk only by night He took his thermos and left for Rome feeling like a dumbass, quite stupid When he got there, two arms alone greeted him, " dad your home!" You would have thought the King arrived together they made Osso in Buco ... Drinking in the elixir of life his child derived happiness, for his dad was really in the know! Joe gave his resignation and became a chef no, they didn't ask him for a passport. He worked with a nice old man named Jeff together they served Portuguese red port; No one ever made him feel like a dum-dum again as he poured the wine he asked, ... " say when?"

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Date: 6/22/2025 1:43:00 PM
I enjoyed your wonderful write/story. Great Picture... When one finds their calling they are a happy person. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 6/22/2025 3:37:00 PM
Thankyou for stopping by it was delightful reading your comment today
Date: 6/22/2025 10:00:00 AM
Nice poem
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Date: 6/22/2025 3:37:00 PM
thank you Jay, for commenting, hope you are keeping well :)

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