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As God Is

as sun is witness
moon sits on a bank of clouds
day’s trial begins.

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Joe Maverick

October 13, 2021 at 12:43 PM

Richard says bring on the day.'As we live in this A dayless night-time manufactured darkness Is walled in on small screens mainframe fed Buying and selling the bodies and souls of Humans buying by bribing officials and usury Held businesses to sell their collateral the flocks Of consuming offerings dumbed down masked Consenters to a masked protocol the overseers Look through ' virtual windows they judge which Next move? Many nations nod acceptance yet Not all leaders will, said well Richard

Richard Lamoureux

April 16, 2021 at 6:51 AM

I wonder if a trial date has been set yet?

Richard Lamoureux

March 26, 2021 at 5:36 AM

I say bring on the day!

Sara Kendrick

March 3, 2021 at 4:18 AM

I really like it when there is a view of both the sun and moon so easily seen. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Suzanne Delaney

March 4, 2021 at 12:59 PM

Sara: So nice to read your comment and I sincerely enjoy your work too, SuZ

Liam Mcdaid

January 21, 2021 at 2:42 PM

beautifully painted

Andrea Dietrich

December 24, 2020 at 6:41 PM

oh this is so good, Suzanne. Merry Christmas to you and may it be a wonderful new year

Jennifer Fenn

December 4, 2020 at 7:22 PM

Beautiful haiku and photo to match!

Harry Horsman

November 29, 2020 at 12:46 AM

Reminds me of the song 'Lucky old sun rolling around heaven all day' Superb haiku, says everything about the human race.

Suzanne Delaney

December 1, 2020 at 4:48 AM

Hi Harry...always happy when you stop by. Yes we have some predictability in life. Day must become night. Best, SuZ

L. J. Carber

November 27, 2020 at 7:59 AM

Quite a good haiku, Suz

Suzanne Delaney

November 27, 2020 at 8:14 AM

Hello Len: Thanks for your nice comment. I was doing a series of Haiku to get my Muse to wake up. Best, SuZ

Paul Callus

November 25, 2020 at 2:33 AM

Hopefully, after a good night's sleep, with God's help we face (and overcome) the trials of a new day! ~ Hope you are keeping well, my friend:) Warm regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

November 27, 2020 at 8:12 AM

Hi Paul: I am keeping well but days seems to get wings this time of year. Already time to finish up Christmas cards etc. Best, SuZ

Robert L. Hinshaw

November 21, 2020 at 9:44 AM

Splendid haiku, Suzanne, with beautiful thought and picture accompanying it. Many thanks for your kind comments re the Grandeur of Autumn. Happy Thanksgiving and best wishes as you continue your poetical journey. Bob H

Suzanne Delaney

November 27, 2020 at 8:11 AM

Thanks so much, Robert: I appreciate your visits always, SuZ