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As God Had Planned

I dreamed I found the promised land, Where people lived as God had planned. In honest labour they tilled the fields, Gathered crops and shared the yield. No threat here of annihilation, No fanatics or warring nations. Our good earth pollution free, At one with nature, as it should be. But in the morn when I awoke, That promised land went up in smoke. Oh but that it could have been, I wished, that I could live that dream. Entry for I Dreamed a Dream Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One. 17/2/19. Placed 3rd.

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Date: 2/23/2019 1:11:00 PM
Love this poem. Keep on dreaming! Because your dream is coming back. God promised it.-)) Panagiota
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/23/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota. :)
Date: 2/21/2019 10:21:00 PM
Dreams to look forward to... Congratulations, Gary, on your winning poem :) hugs Eve
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/22/2019 5:11:00 AM
Thank you Eve. :)
Date: 2/21/2019 4:01:00 AM
- Without our dreams, this world would not have been easy to live in, Gary :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/21/2019 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 2/20/2019 5:29:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/20/2019 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Sara. :)
Date: 2/20/2019 3:09:00 PM
I hope you find your promised land Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/20/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 2/19/2019 6:17:00 AM
A dream we all wish to live, Gary. Wonderful write and best wishes for a win with this priceless piece. Charlie
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/19/2019 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. :)
Date: 2/17/2019 7:29:00 PM
me too! You had me at the first line! Excellent!
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/18/2019 5:17:00 AM
Thank you P.S. :)

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