Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

As God As My Witness

The Life Quixotic is still Chaotic, 
Still despotic while Tyrants rule. 
Joy, it seems, a thing of dreams
When I wander like a Fool. 
Eternally internally profoundly confused- 
Searching for Time far better spent 
In a Mind I find unfit- MISUSED! 
A wish to be Omnipotent...

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~JustThatArchaicPoet

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Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2013 at 8:39 AM Congrats on the win, JTAP Just That Archaic Poet December 2, 2013 at 11:49 AM Thanks, Doc! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2013 at 5:57 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Just That Archaic Poet December 2, 2013 at 8:34 AM Thanks so much, Anne Lise! :)

Robin Davis November 8, 2013 at 7:21 PM Chan my dear friend This is a deep and emotional write. All your emotions are coming out in this write and the reader can feel your despair. thanks for another great comment on my Crazily Contagious poem. Hugs and love sweet pea Just That Archaic Poet November 9, 2013 at 5:43 AM Glad you felt the emotions. Thanks for dropping by, Sweet Pea! <3

Charmaine Chircop November 6, 2013 at 2:46 PM I can feel your pulse rate ..and the beating of a heart searching for joy..What you search for is what im searching for and others too.Never give up..Joy might touch your life when least expected..through the simplest of things .I am enjoying the prodound way you think with. Just That Archaic Poet November 9, 2013 at 5:44 AM Than you for the kind and encouraging words, Charm, and for dropping by with a review :) Charmaine Chircop November 6, 2013 at 2:47 PM profound..Grr sorry for typo..its so difficult when im using phone : )