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As For the Rich

As for (most of) the rich, Earth is Paradise while Heaven is Hell.

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06/12/2013
For: Broken Wings' "Monoku Form" Contest.

Copyright © Abdulhafeez Oyewole | Year Posted 2013

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Michael Miers Date: 9/9/2014 5:43:00 PM 'the class which has the power to rob upon a large scale has also the power to control the government and legalize their robbery' Eugene Debs right on. Login to Reply

Te Indi Date: 2/10/2014 8:31:00 PM It is easier for a camel to enter through the eye of a needle than for a rich man to enter into the gates of heaven. You know reality. Login to Reply Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 3/5/2014 1:23:00 PM From Mark, you dropped wisdom which sure befits the above line. Thanks once more for the visitation, Asante.

Richard D Seal Date: 12/25/2013 6:11:00 AM This my dear friend is an excellent observation, it's a pity we can't have more equality in the world, would be a better place. Hope you're having a wonderful Christmas. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/25/2013 9:45:00 AM Thank you richard for your excellent submission. Christmas is great here. Merry Christmas to you!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/9/2013 11:45:00 PM oh yes, I LIKE this one!!! Login to Reply Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/10/2013 8:52:00 AM Thanks Andrea for your nice comment.

Joe Inka Date: 12/9/2013 10:35:00 PM So much is said in one line. It makes me think if more wealthy people adopted your philosophy the world could be a paradise for all, Well done Login to Reply Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/10/2013 8:51:00 AM Thanks Joe for your nice comment on my work.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/9/2013 6:28:00 PM put both lines on one line to conform with the monoku form and increase your chances for the contest. There is much wisdom in this poem. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/10/2013 8:51:00 AM You are most welcome. Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/10/2013 8:49:00 AM I will see to that. Thanks my good friend, Richard.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/7/2013 5:29:00 AM Lovely expression and true one, Ahafeez Login to Reply Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/10/2013 8:47:00 AM Thanks Dr. Ram for your nice comment.