As Easy As 1 2 3

Future a breath away,
past a breath lost,
sleeping,we dream

Faith is evidence,
hope just as strong,
wanting so bad,we believe.

You win some and you lose,
trial and error,
and you achieve.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 8:33 AM
Very Of-Taking For such short Poetry:)
Loveless Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 9:22 AM
Simple And Still Beautiful.
Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 7:30 PM
beautifully written.
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June 6, 2009 at 7:52 AM
Such an honest life view. Interesting use of this concise form with a good message. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Bird Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 12:59 PM
A wonderful write that shines the light. Thank you for commenting on my work, always appreciated.
Orozco Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Beautiful write! Good form!
Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 10:01 PM
I love this ... more light for reason ... more praise for the write.
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