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Future a breath away, past a breath lost, sleeping,we dream Faith is evidence, hope just as strong, wanting so bad,we believe. You win some and you lose, trial and error, and you achieve.

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Date: 6/12/2009 8:33:00 AM
Very Of-Taking For such short Poetry:)
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Date: 6/10/2009 9:22:00 AM
Simple And Still Beautiful.
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:30:00 PM
beautifully written.
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:52:00 AM
Such an honest life view. Interesting use of this concise form with a good message. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/5/2009 12:59:00 PM
A wonderful write that shines the light. Thank you for commenting on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 6/5/2009 7:11:00 AM
Beautiful write! Good form!
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Date: 6/4/2009 10:01:00 PM
I love this ... more light for reason ... more praise for the write.
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