Lycia Harding Poet Ninette

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As Dusk Arrives

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             Night
            unpins
         her dark hair

       untangling stars
  as Dusk sets the Sun 
      down in the Sea 

        She'll comb it
            while he 
             sleeps...

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Christuraj Alex July 13, 2021 at 8:46 PM Dark unpinning her hair... Beautiful.

Jan Allison June 27, 2021 at 8:12 AM absolutely delightful Lycia i adore imagery of the night pinning back her hair adding this to my faves its an absolute gem:-) hugs Jan xx Lycia Harding July 2, 2021 at 3:15 PM Thank you, Jan! Xoxo, LyLy