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As Dawn Can Only Tell

the sudden hint of the early sun strokes the dove the mid morning air swiftly wips threw the raven the morning moves on the sky is no longer its love the afternoon hunger grows on in draven he was the shining star as she was the only losted he knows what is going threw her mind of wonderful lust she sat in the cornner staring at him onl as closed she looked and knew what he was goin to ask of her so she fussed he cant control what is untameable she cant make him stop loving i cant prove to anyone that i am capable she shrugges showing she is carring fly away my little dove never to come back come to me my valint raven and dont lack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/20/2011 7:10:00 PM
thank you everyone even tho i am not really experienced in poetry but i really do try my best thank you everyone
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "The Spenserian Sonnet" Ashley. A well deserved winner. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2011 9:55:00 PM
Kudos Ashley for HM in Dr Ram's Spenserian contest with this creative piece. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/15/2011 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest, Ashley! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:57:00 AM
It's great to see your success Ashley. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored HM. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:37:00 AM
Congrats Ashley on your HM in Dr. Ram's Sonnet contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor...
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:09:00 AM
Cngratulations on this HM win in my contest, ashley
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