As Dawn Can Only Tell

the sudden hint of the early sun strokes the dove
the mid morning air swiftly wips threw the raven
the morning moves on the sky is no longer its love
the afternoon hunger grows on in draven

he was the shining star as she was the only losted
he knows what is going threw her mind of wonderful lust
she sat in the cornner staring at him onl as closed
she looked and knew what he was goin to ask of her so she fussed

he cant control what is untameable
she cant make him stop loving 
i cant prove to anyone that i am capable
she shrugges showing she is carring

fly away my little dove never to come back
come to me my valint raven and dont lack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bagnato Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 7:10 PM
thank you everyone even tho i am not really experienced in poetry but i really do try my best thank you everyone
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "The Spenserian Sonnet" Ashley. A well deserved winner. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Kudos Ashley for HM in Dr Ram's Spenserian contest with this creative piece. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Devonshire Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest, Ashley! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 8:57 AM
It's great to see your success Ashley. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored HM. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Congrats Ashley on your HM in Dr. Ram's Sonnet contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor...
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Cngratulations on this HM win in my contest, ashley
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