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As Darkness Falls

As darkness falls into my life The world has turned from day to night life has changed in just one day and you don't have a thing to say From love to enimy number one I never thought This day would come of all the hateful things you've done I guess you thought You had to run Your day will come and i can't wait When your destiny Becomes your fate As you feel the rage... the pain... the hate... I think about the darkest times And can't accept the bottom line As I turn my back and close my eyes It feels like death This thing called life it's hard to say what's really true As i clear my head and thoughts of you Everything I thought I knew come to find I have no clue It's safe to say We're far from sane To live the way We did in pain Life can seem So dark and gray When everyday's a tear drop stain I guess I am The one to blame As darkness falls On me like rain

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Date: 11/2/2017 12:58:00 PM
Heart-wrenching ..A well -penned poem.After darkness and rain ..there's always the sun and even a halo.??.Welcome to ps.
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Date: 10/6/2017 5:43:00 PM
Type the characters you see in the picture Validate "AWESOME"
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George Lawson
Date: 10/7/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thanks I'm new to this site
Date: 10/6/2017 11:21:00 AM
A really beautiful written poem, it was very beautiful, everything about it was perfect, your rhyming scheme, your story, everything, it truly touch my heart, seems like you re new here so I should welcome you to ps, I m sure that you re gonna enjoy your time here and continue to write, I ll be looking for your poems and yeah I also have simliar poems, Find time someday to read them and then let me know how they are
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George Lawson
Date: 10/7/2017 1:54:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words. I'm still figuring this thing out.

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