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as cold sudden rain

as cold sudden rain pummels our umbrella. . . . . your long soft warm kiss For Deborah Beachboard's Haiku Contest

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Date: 3/2/2018 10:39:00 AM
Ahhh!! Congrats. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2018 2:22:00 AM
Oh, the wonderfully romantic picture this paints! And a touch of "Breakfast at Tiffany's", which I adore ... that crimp of melancholy poignancy - this is a fav for sure! Congrats, my friend! :-) <3 (This would have been my winner - but so many good ones!)
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:48:00 PM
Andrea, your haiku is warm and mushy. Love it. Congratulations. ~ Sonia
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:20:00 PM
Nice contrast!
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:04:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Wonderfully written!
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Date: 3/1/2018 5:51:00 PM
Very sweet. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 3/1/2018 5:15:00 PM
Nicely done, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 3/1/2018 5:07:00 PM
A lovely, cute, romantic haiku, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:19:00 AM
Why the long title Andrea. JK. Love it. a sweet kiss under the sky. I remember this contest. SKAT
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Date: 4/4/2014 8:22:00 PM
Beautiful romantic haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/3/2014 5:02:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Congrats on your win. Lasting imagery. Well done. Theresa xx
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Date: 4/3/2014 2:00:00 AM
My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, andrea
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Date: 4/3/2014 12:02:00 AM
, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. GOOD NIGHT, luv LINDA
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Date: 4/2/2014 6:52:00 PM
It's a beauty, Andrea, being under the same umbrella in pouring rain is a wonderful setting for a bit of romance. Congrats!!
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Date: 4/2/2014 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara..Ahh!!!
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:36:00 AM
- Hey Andrea - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 10:17:00 AM
My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my very dear friend Andrea! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora
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Date: 7/24/2013 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations on this old poem doing so well in the contest lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/23/2013 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/23/2013 6:50:00 AM
congrats on your win Andrea....so romantic
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Date: 7/23/2013 5:40:00 AM
Holly cow Andrea, my old friend. You have a beauty here. Fantastic moment. Congrats and Smiles
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:41:00 PM
lovely contrasting sensations! line 3 would be as good if not better simply [a warm kiss] congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:22:00 PM
congrats, andrea. ran
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Date: 7/22/2013 11:31:00 AM
That will be a very good feeling.Good one Andrea.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:32:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your excellent win. Well deserve. Warm Smiles, Connie
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