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As Cold Sudden Rain

as cold sudden rain pummels our umbrella. . . . . your long warm kiss For Deborah Beachboard's Haiku Contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2018 10:39:00 AM

Ahhh!! Congrats. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/2/2018 2:22:00 AM

Oh, the wonderfully romantic picture this paints! And a touch of "Breakfast at Tiffany's", which I adore ... that crimp of melancholy poignancy - this is a fav for sure! Congrats, my friend! :-) <3 (This would have been my winner - but so many good ones!)

Sonia Walker

Date: 3/1/2018 8:48:00 PM

Andrea, your haiku is warm and mushy. Love it. Congratulations. ~ Sonia

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/1/2018 8:20:00 PM

Nice contrast!

Deborah Guenther Beachboard

Date: 3/1/2018 6:04:00 PM

Wonderful imagery. Wonderfully written!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/1/2018 5:51:00 PM

Very sweet. Congrats on your win, Andrea.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/1/2018 5:15:00 PM

Nicely done, congratulations on your win !

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2018 5:07:00 PM

A lovely, cute, romantic haiku, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:19:00 AM

Why the long title Andrea. JK. Love it. a sweet kiss under the sky. I remember this contest. SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2014 8:22:00 PM

Beautiful romantic haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Theresa Stephens

Date: 4/3/2014 5:02:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Congrats on your win. Lasting imagery. Well done. Theresa xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2014 2:00:00 AM

My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2014 12:02:00 AM

, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. GOOD NIGHT, luv LINDA

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/2/2014 6:52:00 PM

It's a beauty, Andrea, being under the same umbrella in pouring rain is a wonderful setting for a bit of romance. Congrats!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2014 3:11:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara..Ahh!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2014 11:36:00 AM

- Hey Andrea - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/2/2014 10:17:00 AM

My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my very dear friend Andrea! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora