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As Cold Sudden Rain

as cold sudden rain
pummels our umbrella. . . . . 
your  long  warm   kiss


For Deborah Beachboard's Haiku Contest

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Sara Kendrick

March 2, 2018 at 10:39 AM

Ahhh!! Congrats. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara

Gregory Richard Barden

March 2, 2018 at 2:22 AM

Oh, the wonderfully romantic picture this paints! And a touch of "Breakfast at Tiffany's", which I adore ... that crimp of melancholy poignancy - this is a fav for sure! Congrats, my friend! :-) <3 (This would have been my winner - but so many good ones!)

Sonia Walker

March 1, 2018 at 8:48 PM

Andrea, your haiku is warm and mushy. Love it. Congratulations. ~ Sonia

Kim Rodrigues

March 1, 2018 at 8:20 PM

Nice contrast!

Deborah Guenther Beachboard

March 1, 2018 at 6:04 PM

Wonderful imagery. Wonderfully written!

Line Gauthier

March 1, 2018 at 5:51 PM

Very sweet. Congrats on your win, Andrea.

Eve Roper

March 1, 2018 at 5:15 PM

Nicely done, congratulations on your win !

Paul Callus

March 1, 2018 at 5:07 PM

A lovely, cute, romantic haiku, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 11:19 AM

Why the long title Andrea. JK. Love it. a sweet kiss under the sky. I remember this contest. SKAT

Kim Merryman

April 4, 2014 at 8:22 PM

Beautiful romantic haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Theresa Stephens

April 3, 2014 at 5:02 AM

Hi Andrea, Congrats on your win. Lasting imagery. Well done. Theresa xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 3, 2014 at 2:00 AM

My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, andrea

Poet Destroyer A

April 3, 2014 at 12:02 AM

, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. GOOD NIGHT, luv LINDA

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

April 2, 2014 at 6:52 PM

It's a beauty, Andrea, being under the same umbrella in pouring rain is a wonderful setting for a bit of romance. Congrats!!

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2014 at 3:11 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara..Ahh!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 2, 2014 at 11:36 AM

- Hey Andrea - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

April 2, 2014 at 10:17 AM

My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my very dear friend Andrea! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora