As Blessings Serenade

As blessings serenade





Only if mountains could lend me some height,
Only if morning sunshine could confer any bright,

Will then my heart beat for His forever glory,
Or my colour would simply fade in pride;
and astound people that close-by reside ?
He wobbles turbulence in the wild sea,
Chills out the fiercest of all blazing plea, 
creating golden history in one stride.

beauty of nature
as fragrance poises in air,
Virginal chirp of sparrows,
Sinless pure colours 
and tender pristine flowers,
Sing hymns in His reverence.



Written May 11, 2017
For "Three style III" contest by Laura loo

One couplet- AA
One rhyming stanza- ABBAAB
One Sedoka- 5-7-7-5-7-7 unrhymed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 4:59 PM
so pretty, I especially liked the tanka at the end. Congrats on your win. Long time no see, UPma!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 8:40 AM
An enjoyable read! Congrats Upma.
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 11:32 PM
So good to read you, again, Dr. Upma! Charming poem (I would have put it higher on the list!)! Congrats on your win :)
Scars Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 9:37 PM
what a glorious poem about strong faith and hope! It's so refreshing to read praise to our Lord. This is just beautiful and moving...thank you for warming my heart. be blessed! :) -luloo
Vaso Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:15 PM
Hi there Upma, beautiful poem! I see I have missed a few but I must say glad to see you back writing!!! :)
A. Sharma Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:30 PM
Thanks Arthur!
Smith Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Simply beautiful Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Thanks Tim..
Turner Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 8:06 AM
"Oh, Lord, my God. When I in awesome wonder. Consider all, the worlds ,Thy hands have made." A beautiful write, Doc:)
A. Sharma Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Thnx a lot for ur forever kind words Daniel..
B. Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Lovely!
A. Sharma Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 11:32 PM
Thnx Carol..
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