Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

As Big As Life

As a child of only three,
looking out over the big blue sea.
Her eyes got huge with such glee,
as the waves hit her tiny knees.
Mommy I need to pee,
in the water is the key.
As big as life she can see,
making her wanting to flee.
At this young age did she make a plea,
making this big as life agree.
Will this wide blue sea hold Marie,
or in years will it set her free?

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Michael Tor February 8, 2025 at 11:57 PM Lovely cute poem, poor little had to go. The imagery I loved and the cute theme also Paula... Good to write about the ocean in the winter. Thanks for doing so...

Panagiota Romios February 8, 2025 at 2:00 PM I liked how you repainted the picture of being three! Kids love to tinkle in the sea or in pools))). I think it is great that you added a sense of humor to the the lyricism of this poem. Thus, Faving this one. Pangie xx

Hilda Greenhough February 4, 2025 at 10:35 PM I enjoy your poem. The small child must feel a sense of grandeur as she sees something so big as the sea. Paula Goldsmith February 5, 2025 at 7:13 AM Thank You for your note and support. Glad you enjoyed my "As Big As Life" write. I love the sea/beach but none here for me to enjoy. The big blue sea looks so very big to a young child. It is fun to watch their eyes get sooooooo big. Have a great/blessed/fun day..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 4, 2025 at 6:57 PM This is a charming tale of a little child and the sea, Paula. I enjoyed this a lot. :) Paula Goldsmith February 5, 2025 at 7:11 AM Thank You for your note and support. Glad you enjoyed my "As Big As Life" tale/write. Yes, the big sea looks so very big to a young child. I love the sea/beach but none here for me to enjoy. Have a great/blessed/fun day..................

John Read February 4, 2025 at 8:34 AM I used to love being at the seaside, so many lovely memories over the years, enjoyed reading your poem Paula, have a lovely day. xx Paula Goldsmith February 4, 2025 at 9:13 AM Thank You for your note and support. Glad you enjoyed my "As Big As Life" write. I also love the sea/beach but none here now. I have some great old memories of great times there. Have a great/blessed/fun day..................

Oliver Mckeithan February 3, 2025 at 3:41 PM I can really picture this. Wonderful poem with nice imagery and a good story. Paula Goldsmith February 4, 2025 at 9:10 AM Thank You for your note and support. Glad you found my "As Big As Life" write to be a, Wonderful poem with nice imagery and a good story. It was fun to bring to life. Have a great/blessed/fun day..................

Paula Goldsmith February 3, 2025 at 9:25 AM As Big As Life~Date Written: 2/2/2025 Written By A Human Poet...