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As Above So NOT Below

("Anagogical Moments Merit Badge" #39, 2011, original oil)

As Above So NOT Below

The tripartite world of material appearance
Sandwiched between the infinite depths
Of the unconscious 
And infinite expanse 
Of transcendent supraconsciousness 
Encompasses all that is and isn’t 
Known and unknown 
Desired and undesirable….

Confused, turned upside down
By our own inverted perceptions
Most of us contentedly live
Lives of ignorant bliss
Even though it’s more often one of suffering 
Nestled securely in the middle
Within the sandwich of two ineffables
High and low.

And then there are the few
Driven for whatever perverse reasons
To escape the safe and mundane
Striving for transcendence
Most often settling instead for descendence
Into the unconscious.
This is the easy path after all
The downward path of gravity
Earth Mother
Universal womb
And holy bhaga.

And so we go
Tempted by The Fates to strive 
In whatever way they guide us
For the unattainable
Or that which once attained
Dissolves all other….

And so we rise 
You and I against all odds
Against the force of Nature
Somehow turned upside down again
Totally mixed up and thus righted 
In our confusion
Breaking for a surface
Which holds the light
A surface dividing 
The above from the below
The earth from sky 
The Mother from Father
Our past from future.

Rising, propelled with the last trace of breath, prana, chi
To break the surface
And cycle of existence
To finally at last break free.

To take another
And dive again.

(11/23/23)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/27/2023 4:31:00 PM
Sounds like a baptism, and thoughts of an hour glass turned upside down, as above, so below, the sand trickling fast, each second. Perhaps one has to go with the flow.
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James Moore
Date: 12/1/2023 11:19:00 AM
And this lyric from the next song on the album - absolutely perfect...; "I'd rather trust a man who doesn't shout what he's found, There's no need to sell me if you're homeward bound." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yO91-fEa4k
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James Moore
Date: 12/1/2023 11:08:00 AM
Was just listening to this song after many many years and was pleased to find how the subject runs parallel to my poem (but with much better poetry!) - such great lyrics here; "There's only one direction In the faces that I see It's upward to the ceiling Where the chamber's said to be Like the forest fight for sunlight That takes root in every tree They are pulled up by the magnet Believing they're free The carpet crawlers heed their callers We've gotta get in to get out..." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2yUN6CsuVPw
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James Moore
Date: 11/27/2023 5:55:00 PM
I like the image of a baptism...and the moment of emergence. And the hourglass; humanity, physicality a pinch-point where so much can happen... or be avoided, the realm of constant challenges and instant karma. And yes, I think going with the flow is inevitable - for better or worse depending on the current/tide...
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