As Above, So Below

Astrologists  with ancient viewS
Seek to predict  what  people dO 

As mirrors of the heaven's climB
By measuring  the sky  and timE.
Oft  I look up  with differed goaL
Valuing where  my soul  may gO
Ever to rise        when buried loW.

8/28/21
Message in an Acrostic 2 Poetry Contest
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Hankins Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Wow, well-done, Jesse. I'll bet this took quite a bit of time to work out. Nice writing.
Rowe Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Thanks. Interestingly, this came together rather quickly for me. The hardest part was end rhyming with end acrostic.
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