Artistry Observed

Morn's great beauty
Each unique sunrise

Varied colors_ shades
Decorate sky

Evening's beauty
In setting sun
Artistry observed  

Contest:Shanzi
Sponsor:Joann Grisetti
Form: Shanzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:38 AM
Sara, congrats on your win, love it..David
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Beautiful, Sara! I could lose myself in the shades of sky. Congrats on your wonderful win! I hope Doris is quickly recovering. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Love your title line, artistry observed. Way to do the contest. Congratulations on your win.
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Sara Congrats on your win!Very nice Shanzi by you!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 6:02 AM
congrats Sara on another great win for this incredible write.. feeling the glorious beauty of these words.. hope Doris and hubby doing well ..
Gooden Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 5:35 PM
Thanks. And thanks for introducing you to me.
Horne Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 9:18 AM
beautiful entry for Joann's contest, Sara
Maverick Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Well conveyed piece here Sara, hope you are well your writes seem to keep coming; I will try to comment and post some more:)
Onclaud Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:14 AM
superb in from and content, sara... a mother's love is never-ending!... my winning bet!..:) hugggs!
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 1:05 AM
Sara, I think you did this form very well!! Sure hope you score a big win. GREAT job.
Sivey Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 7:08 PM
I just love your delightful images of these sunrises or sunsets! You describe them so eloquently, I love your expressive poem! What a fantastic write my friend! Great Work!!
Henderson Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:53 PM
Good luck in the contest Sara, I love it. Peace and blessings.
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