Artificial Tree

fiber optic tree colors glowing, changing hues --- no pine scent

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2011 9:21:00 PM

This is really cool, telling what it lacks in that last line. Good modern haiku.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/7/2011 2:54:00 PM

what a sweet haiku, Kim. I love those fibre optic trees. I must admit it always makes me sad to see all the trees cut down just to look pretty for a few weeks

William Baker

Date: 12/6/2011 4:33:00 PM

Hello Kim, Haiku is fun, isn't it. Have you ever tried a similar type, 5-7-5? as example: getting old is tough no, getting old is living being old is tough. yours in the spirit of sharing. Bill Baker

David Williams

Date: 12/6/2011 1:31:00 PM

Kim love the poem, hate imitation trees..David