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Artificial Tree

fiber optic tree
                                           colors glowing, changing hues ---
                                                        no pine scent

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Andrea Dietrich

December 7, 2011 at 9:21 PM

This is really cool, telling what it lacks in that last line. Good modern haiku.

Jack Horne

December 7, 2011 at 2:54 PM

what a sweet haiku, Kim. I love those fibre optic trees. I must admit it always makes me sad to see all the trees cut down just to look pretty for a few weeks

William Baker

December 6, 2011 at 4:33 PM

Hello Kim, Haiku is fun, isn't it. Have you ever tried a similar type, 5-7-5? as example: getting old is tough no, getting old is living being old is tough. yours in the spirit of sharing. Bill Baker