artfulness



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               finesse …
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Rodgers Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 9:08 AM
Dear Ghairo, I really liked the minimalism of your piece, for it says a lot with so little. It feels more like an impression than a statement, which makes me lean in and fill the space with my own thoughts. A cool, thoughtful piece. Autumn Blessings, Dear Ghairo, Daniel
Daniels Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Yeah, Daniel. I sometimes have too many words forgetting that it is really impossible for one soul to fully understand another. We are ALL fundamentally alone in infinite space, but too fearful to acknowledge this. If I remember my psychology readings, Carl Jung recognised this. I’m just playing around with my Mercury downloads on this site. Blessings for comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Like it!
Daniels Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:54 AM
ThkU 4 pop-in Kim. Less said, the better. Trust your health is improving. Sending you some spring Sun. x.
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