arteries of night hiku

smoke of sage e s c a p e s ancient arcs carved in crystals ~ a r t e r i e s of night ...

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Robert James Liguori

Date: 5/30/2025 4:13:00 PM

Mesmerizing haiku. Thanks for dazzling us readers.

JCB Brul

Date: 5/29/2025 8:23:00 PM

Another stunning Haiku that will mesmerise the reader! Congratulations (may I borrow your words) "dear poetic soul" Keep shining my dear! #teamhiku ^___^JCB

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/29/2025 5:24:00 PM

A Roman ritual of rose vines and eager veins entwine to entreat your questing heartbeat to taste the wild soul of Love's feast, in which you discover sympathy of the stars...J.A.B.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/29/2025 7:17:00 AM

You have been a great pioneer with these hikus. You have a fantastic strategy for writing them! I truly like reading them. Dear Ink, the spirit of these fragmented haikus is deeply ingrained in you. If I were to do it, I would use a semicircle to portray arcs and diamond-shaped text to represent crystals. But you've done a wonderful job here; I only wanted to emphasize the complexity of your haiku and the many ways to convey it schematically. Many positive vibes are being thrown your way, and I appreciate my placement in your recent contest.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/29/2025 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations poet friend on your top win in Brian1s contest with a thoughtful write on "arteries of night." Wish you a pleasant day filled with blessings of light.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2025 10:39:00 PM

Sooo good. Congrats to you in the parade of hiku. Lots of people are entering them now!

Anne Winter

Date: 5/28/2025 6:55:00 PM

Dear I E, I love reading your haikus, you have a way of writing haikus brilliantly! I really enjoy reading them. Best, Anne

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/28/2025 3:16:00 PM

I'm in adjustment mode. This form has sprung aplenty on Soup. 1st saw via Strand Cont. Laughed - I had to move head or laptop to read. (sshh, sometimes I call My Tim over to help me decipher text sshh) I'm happy to say I've seeds of 'like' sprouting for images like u created & often words are impressive. We need more keyboard options if this keeps up. I DO like this. Eventually I won't feel like someone took my comfy jeans and left a garment I don't recognize. CayCay