arteries of night hiku

Mesmerizing haiku. Thanks for dazzling us readers.

Another stunning Haiku that will mesmerise the reader! Congratulations (may I borrow your words) "dear poetic soul" Keep shining my dear! #teamhiku ^___^JCB

A Roman ritual of rose vines and eager veins entwine to entreat your questing heartbeat to taste the wild soul of Love's feast, in which you discover sympathy of the stars...J.A.B.

You have been a great pioneer with these hikus. You have a fantastic strategy for writing them! I truly like reading them. Dear Ink, the spirit of these fragmented haikus is deeply ingrained in you. If I were to do it, I would use a semicircle to portray arcs and diamond-shaped text to represent crystals. But you've done a wonderful job here; I only wanted to emphasize the complexity of your haiku and the many ways to convey it schematically. Many positive vibes are being thrown your way, and I appreciate my placement in your recent contest.

Congratulations poet friend on your top win in Brian1s contest with a thoughtful write on "arteries of night." Wish you a pleasant day filled with blessings of light.

Sooo good. Congrats to you in the parade of hiku. Lots of people are entering them now!

Dear I E, I love reading your haikus, you have a way of writing haikus brilliantly! I really enjoy reading them. Best, Anne

I'm in adjustment mode. This form has sprung aplenty on Soup. 1st saw via Strand Cont. Laughed - I had to move head or laptop to read. (sshh, sometimes I call My Tim over to help me decipher text sshh) I'm happy to say I've seeds of 'like' sprouting for images like u created & often words are impressive. We need more keyboard options if this keeps up. I DO like this. Eventually I won't feel like someone took my comfy jeans and left a garment I don't recognize. CayCay

What a wonderful/creative "hiku" write. It was fun reading a short write from you. Have a lovely day writing away...............

Beautiful and raw at the same time,,,, well, maybe not raw- delicate and alive <3 :)

- "ancient arcs carved in crystals" ~ sounds as a shining rainbow, Ink :) - Beautiful :) - hugs

Wonderful haiku papi.. the alliterations are freaking awesome!!!

Very nice hiku as always