arteries

I wish you weren't apart of me
Traces of you flowing through my arteries
Deprived of essentials like a commodity
Wish you were someone who fought hard for me

Take it all, at least what's left
You've burnt this candle from both ends
See the light through the plight

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/5/2024 8:57:00 AM

Hello Shay, Your poem title interested me evoking a raw introspection. It is filled with the struggle of grappling with parts of ourselves we wish weren't there yet that are integral to our being. Your poetic words resonate with the longing for someone who truly values and fights for us. Well-articulated internal conflict with such depth and honesty. Loved it! - Blessings, Daniel Warm regards,