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Artaudian Theatre

no place can I hide atoms of me circle you hope without a trace

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Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/25/2009 3:27:00 AM

Oh, Jimbo ... You Went To Mt. Everest For this One 'Eh ... Not Only Deep, but a Higher Plane of Conscioness... MoonBee

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2009 6:42:00 AM

most excellent..all this romance makes me wonder who the lucky lady is? Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/25/2009 6:02:00 PM

nice poem, keep up the good work!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/21/2009 7:14:00 PM

What a fantastic senryu!! I almost missed this one!! Love it ! ps...soup mail reply!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2009 1:17:00 PM

When someone is ever on our minds, it can certainly feel like there is no place to hide. "Hope without a trace" is quite a provocative and powerful ending to this wonderful senryu, Jim. Awesome work! Love you, Carolyn

Laurie Ginn

Date: 10/18/2009 9:30:00 PM

Hoping without a trace, I've read that line three times, what a ponder, nice job Mr. Marshall

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/18/2009 6:50:00 PM

LOVE the second line!! Outstanding senryu James! ~Trudy~

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/18/2009 3:18:00 PM

Yes, Jim, love is a circle and like a circle it has no ending. Like this senryu. ...Keep writing, Gert

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/18/2009 7:12:00 AM

i can feel myself in a circle of love--beautifully written my good friend-,a fav..Charma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/18/2009 6:03:00 AM

Well I'd want more than a trace left behind LOL. Light, Love & down comforters

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/17/2009 3:29:00 PM

Interesting Senryu. Keep writing. Sara