Arrived

a budding romance
love found on vacation....
perfect couple

she arrived
3 trunks, 10 suitcases, more....
three day visit

he
should have known....
too much baggage

girlfriendsenryu

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Kim Rodrigues

September 16, 2021 at 6:04 AM

I’d say so. He’d have to let her unload her baggage or send her packing…lol

Sara Kendrick

September 16, 2021 at 7:02 AM

Kim, Yes, it is up to him as to what to do about the relationship as far as he is concerned sometimes it is better to walk away at the beginning but then sometimes we think love conquers all but sometimes it does not. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Scott Thirtyseven

September 16, 2021 at 12:09 AM

What fun Sara, a pleasure to read.

Sara Kendrick

September 16, 2021 at 4:14 AM

Scott, Thanks. I am glad you got pleasure from the reading. Sara

Brian Strand

September 15, 2021 at 3:18 AM

So true Sara,you have a flair for short succinct verse

Sara Kendrick

September 15, 2021 at 4:30 AM

Brian, I appreciate your visits and encouragement. I still am not back like I was before. My brain fog is still really bad and other health matters still are going on. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

September 15, 2021 at 2:22 AM

Full of whit, thoroughly enjoyed this piece..Delice

Sara Kendrick

September 15, 2021 at 4:25 AM

Delice, I am glad you enjoyed the humor. Only a small portion of the people in the world have that much baggage but some do so be aware. Your presence here was uplifting this morning. Sara