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a budding romance love found on vacation.... perfect couple she arrived 3 trunks, 10 suitcases, more.... three day visit he should have known.... too much baggage

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/16/2021 6:04:00 AM

I’d say so. He’d have to let her unload her baggage or send her packing…lol

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2021 7:02:00 AM

Kim, Yes, it is up to him as to what to do about the relationship as far as he is concerned sometimes it is better to walk away at the beginning but then sometimes we think love conquers all but sometimes it does not. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/16/2021 12:09:00 AM

What fun Sara, a pleasure to read.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2021 4:14:00 AM

Scott, Thanks. I am glad you got pleasure from the reading. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 9/15/2021 3:18:00 AM

So true Sara,you have a flair for short succinct verse

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2021 4:30:00 AM

Brian, I appreciate your visits and encouragement. I still am not back like I was before. My brain fog is still really bad and other health matters still are going on. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/15/2021 2:22:00 AM

Full of whit, thoroughly enjoyed this piece..Delice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2021 4:25:00 AM

Delice, I am glad you enjoyed the humor. Only a small portion of the people in the world have that much baggage but some do so be aware. Your presence here was uplifting this morning. Sara