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The moon is rising. Darkness descends on the world, It's is night time again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/21/2012 8:31:00 PM
Lex, a wonderful light to wait for... rising or sinking... ,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful haiku with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD
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Alexis Andrews
Date: 2/22/2012 6:53:00 AM
thank you have a good day yourself :D
Date: 2/21/2012 6:08:00 AM
Nice try, not enough oomphh in the 'cut' and you might want to use it's on th last line to fix the syllable count :)
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Date: 2/21/2012 6:14:00 AM
syllable count fixed as for the oomphh : P it was for my english class so i was sceptic on writting it in the first place