Arrival

The moon is rising. Darkness descends on the world, It's is night time again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 21, 2012 at 8:31 PM
Lex, a wonderful light to wait for... rising or sinking... ,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful haiku with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD
Andrews Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 6:53 AM
thank you have a good day yourself :D
Bagnall Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Nice try, not enough oomphh in the 'cut' and you might want to use it's on th last line to fix the syllable count :)
Andrews Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:14 AM
syllable count fixed as for the oomphh : P it was for my english class so i was sceptic on writting it in the first place
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