Around Me..

Praying across the dark clouded sky’s. 
Feeling the presence of God through, 
Natures thundering cries. 

I am one and holy as I feel to be. 
Lucky to be alive when,
Lightning strikes around me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Christian Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 3:10 AM
aww beautiful, I used be scared of lightning when I was a kid but I am not now, so wonderfully written, God bless you from diane
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May 31, 2009 at 10:27 PM
this is beautiful--yes everyday is a gift,we are lucky to see the wonders of this world for another day,and i love the imagery dark clouded sky,then lightning strikes--in our darkness God strikes us with his vibrant light--beautiful--charma
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