Around and Around

Going round and around and round,
Move up, going up and down,
Seeing you it just lights my day,
Believe in God and see me pray,
Funny boy, you make my day,
Stomp your feet and get your way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Canerdy Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 6:23 AM
LOVE it! Mark, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this joyful poem. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Totally charming ~
Rodgers Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 4:26 AM
Congratulations, Mark! Your poem is a rhythmic journey that captures the essence of movement and faith. The playful yet profound imagery leaves a lasting impression. Your unique style and creativity shine brightly, deserving recognition in the poetry contest. Well done on your well-deserved victory! - Blessings, Daniel
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July 21, 2023 at 9:12 AM
A delightful write, Mark! I enjoyed this! Blessings, Kim M
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