Army Life

far from home
away from love
you left me
sad and weak
waiting, watching,
hoping, praying,
will i see you again?
life is empty
color of black
i hate the dark
i am color blind
come back to me
show my the rainbow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hall Mad Poet Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Distance makes the heart grow fonder. War will rip it apart. Cool poem. ( hidden message )
Elliott Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Mmmm there is truth in your statement, clear and hidden .... Much love
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