Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Arms of Love

Riding above in the clouds so high
On heavens beautiful carousel 
A beauty that makes one sigh
Nothing on earth could ever parallel

The journey flows even and steady
Bringing joy to the babies hearts 
Even if we were not quite ready 
There was a calling for them to part

It's in those clouds our young ride
To greet our Heavenly Father above
Into his arms opened so wide
Welcoming them with so much love

3/24/2020

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John Watt August 2, 2020 at 3:15 PM This is wistful and hopeful at the same time. The sadness of considering babies going to heaven is softened by the knowledge that there is a heaven for them to go to. I'm so touched by this, Brenda. Brenda Chiri August 2, 2020 at 5:27 PM Thank you so much John! I do enjoy reading your comments!:)

Paula Goldsmith April 10, 2020 at 12:59 PM Congratulations on your win. It is beautiful. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter............... Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:59 AM Thank you so much!;)

Sam Kauffman April 8, 2020 at 11:18 AM Brenda, congratulations on your first place win - a poem of such comfort and hope my friend! Some very unique rhymes - carousel/parallel. Brenda Chiri April 10, 2020 at 4:23 AM Sam thank you so much!;)

Joseph May April 1, 2020 at 3:42 PM Beautiful write Brenda, best wishes, hugs Brenda Chiri April 3, 2020 at 12:11 AM Joseph thank you so much!;)

Anisha Dutta March 29, 2020 at 12:56 PM Excellent imagery for Heaven. Blessing Brenda Chiri March 29, 2020 at 1:48 PM Thank you Anisha!;)

John Fleming March 28, 2020 at 11:58 AM Looks like someone is starting to feel a little better -- good to see! Relieved to find you are in obvious higher spirits, Poetess. With much affection. :) john Brenda Chiri March 29, 2020 at 2:20 AM Thank you much John! I really appreciate you my dear!;) hugs!;)

Caren Krutsinger March 24, 2020 at 10:00 PM Heaven has never felt so beautifully welcoming. Gorgeous imagery. Brenda Chiri March 26, 2020 at 9:12 PM Ah my county friend thank you so much!;)