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Armies Raising Cain...

Battalions march
on blood soaked darkened red sand,
         Able tears to wash...

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March 29, 2009 at 4:53 AM

Vivid reminder of the price of war. Much said in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Lucinda Bulger

January 11, 2009 at 5:52 PM

I also like the turn on words, along with the title profoundly written. "Able tears to wash..."

Lucinda Bulger

January 11, 2009 at 5:49 PM

This left me shook. I guess because Will is talking to a recruiter now about going in the reserves.... powerful write and very, very well written to express much.