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Armies Raising Cain...

Battalions march on blood soaked darkened red sand, Able tears to wash...

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Date: 3/29/2009 4:53:00 AM

Vivid reminder of the price of war. Much said in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 1/11/2009 5:52:00 PM

I also like the turn on words, along with the title profoundly written. "Able tears to wash..."

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 1/11/2009 5:49:00 PM

This left me shook. I guess because Will is talking to a recruiter now about going in the reserves.... powerful write and very, very well written to express much.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/11/2009 1:34:00 PM

Few words to say so much. God Bless Phyl