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Arm Twist of the Eyes

arm twist of the eyes to admonish the sandman abandon the bed

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2023 11:41:00 AM

Those mornings are rough. Even in retirement it doesn't change. Thanks for sharing this one and for your visits. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2023 1:23:00 PM

So true! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2023 2:52:00 AM

Not if you slept two hours only as happened last night.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 8:15:00 AM

Not so fun, Victor! Hope you get some rest!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/15/2023 2:17:00 AM

Hey Kim, This is an interesting visualization here. It made me think of what kids called "Indian wrestling", but of course with the eyes. Congratulations on being retired and the freedom it allows. Enjoyed.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, Nancy!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2023 6:13:00 PM

'Arm twist of the eyes' -- worth a few minutes mulling over that one! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 7:11:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/14/2023 4:16:00 PM

Sometimes it hard to give up sleep lol, nice one thanks for sharing Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 7:11:00 PM

Glad I’m retired. Hit the hay midmorning to catch up a little!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/14/2023 2:42:00 PM

Hey, I liked this!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 7:11:00 PM

Hey, thanks ;) <3

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/14/2023 11:21:00 AM

Hello Kim, Some of us sleep on our backs, or left side or right side. Or sleep on our hands. We wake up because the hand is asleep. Hugs. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2023 2:23:00 PM

Hello Kim. thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs./Darlene\

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 1:49:00 PM

I know I’m careful with my arms. Love your take on this, Darlene! :)