Arm Twist of the Eyes

arm twist of the eyes to admonish the sandman abandon the bed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Those mornings are rough. Even in retirement it doesn't change. Thanks for sharing this one and for your visits. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 1:23 PM
So true! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 2:52 AM
Not if you slept two hours only as happened last night.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Not so fun, Victor! Hope you get some rest!
Kaufman Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 2:17 AM
Hey Kim, This is an interesting visualization here. It made me think of what kids called "Indian wrestling", but of course with the eyes. Congratulations on being retired and the freedom it allows. Enjoyed.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Nancy!
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:13 PM
'Arm twist of the eyes' -- worth a few minutes mulling over that one! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Thanks, Gershon!
Rose  Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Sometimes it hard to give up sleep lol, nice one thanks for sharing Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Glad I’m retired. Hit the hay midmorning to catch up a little!
Hind Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:42 PM
Hey, I liked this!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Hey, thanks ;) <3
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Hello Kim, Some of us sleep on our backs, or left side or right side. Or sleep on our hands. We wake up because the hand is asleep. Hugs. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Hello Kim. thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs./Darlene\
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:49 PM
I know I’m careful with my arms. Love your take on this, Darlene! :)
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