Arise O Sons of the Shining Stars

Arise O sons of the Shining stars!
Arise and speed like your fish-like cars.
Tan your sorrows and pains with ease
And sway in delight like your Sakura trees.



Arise O sons of the shining stars!
Thorns' scratches on elephant are but minor scars
Send your technology-eyed-gods to work
Let them unfold their talents to move the technological clock



Arise O land of the shining stars!
You are the prime existence of worthy technology dreamers
Your scions stun the world with series of technological perfections
Toyota, Yamaha and Honda are just lovely kids in actions



Arise O land of the shining stars!
Tourists' eyes lost in gourmand stares
Of your ancient beauties lurked in Matsushuma bay
Where blue water, craggy rocks and twisted Pine trees drip ancient wisdom to people of today


For Debbie Guzzi's contest:"Tribute to Japan"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/15/2011 5:48:00 AM
Well penned Joseph....a wonderful tribute.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:56:00 AM
While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated Joseph. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:32:00 AM
Many Congrats Joseph on big coveted win in Debbie's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:15:00 PM
A very original poem, different approach to the contest that was interesting to read. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:35:00 AM
Many congrats to you on your winning piece xx
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this very inspiring write, Joseph, I like the repeating line that you used, very effective :)
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of debbie, Joseph
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:26:00 AM
Congrats Joseph on yur great win in Japan contest .. enjoy luv..
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:48:00 PM
What a lovely and thought provoking tributes you paid to the sons of the island country where the sun never sets, Joseph
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