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Arguing With the Night

Arguing With The Night Closing my eyes I bit my upper lip drew my knees chest high and held them tight drank the dreaded potions final sip slow dimming an ever fading light fluttering eyelids arguing with the night. ©7/30/2017 submitted to – The Sound Of Pages In The Night – Poetry Contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2017 5:21:00 PM

I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..I think we all experience the fluttering eyelids at times..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/31/2017 4:05:00 AM

Very well crafted my friend...time to use the toothpicks lol...best of luck...^WW^

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/31/2017 1:08:00 AM

Well composed John. Wish you best for Contest

Eve Roper

Date: 7/31/2017 12:37:00 AM

Nicely done,John, and saying a good night as my eyes also argues with the night.. good luck in the contest ~*