Aren'T Shadows and Phantoms Alike

I reckon a vast symmetry
between sunset and darkness...
when shadows obscure the starriest scenery,
and clothe trees in tenebrous mystery:
I turn my glace to the full moon in distress! 

Never disappear from my sight, moonlight;
ask the north wind to make shadows vanish:
letting the cool breeze return to delight,
letting stars reappear and dismiss fright,
but is my assumption of fear too brash?

Aren't shadows and phantoms alike?
They come forward without making a sound;
I can crawl slower than a snake,
but fog rises too quickly, how can I escape?
If I run, leaves will crackle...I'll be found!


Written on 11/9/ 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 16, 2015 at 12:17 AM
Andrew, Congratulations on your Shadows at Night win. Love **SKAT**
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November 15, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Wonderful write, Andrew, congratulations on your win ! :)
Lindley Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Andrew, congrats on this great poem and your fine win!!!
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 2:17 PM
wonderful imagery Andrew many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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November 15, 2015 at 1:46 PM
a brilliant pen Andrew congrats on 2nd place hugs
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