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ARE YOU REAL

Open the eyes of wisdom and look at the world Filled with people who are crazy it circles the sun Pessimistic,optimistic,atheist,agnostic Each one,each type No one so ripe.... THIS IS A FAKE WORLD THESE ARE FAKE SOULS When you ring the winning bell it falls at your feet When you slip and fall down darkness stays in your town Your great,the best,superb,the chosen Everyone says something Long lasting is nothing.... THIS IS A FAKE WORLD THESE ARE FAKE SOULS They lock their tummy with greens Hunger in your eyes is not seen Your shadow ignores your calls At the time when night falls Why,how,isn't it,why not You will have only questions If you live on your conscience.... THIS IS A FAKE WORLD THESE ARE FAKE SOULS YOU TRY TO LIVE HERE IT'S SURE YOU CAN'T BE REAL.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/19/2012 12:52:00 AM
Hai really nice poem..
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Date: 7/12/2012 12:27:00 PM
enjoyed reading this lovely write...Patrick
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shans PRIYA
Date: 7/16/2012 5:45:00 AM
thanx pat!!!
Date: 7/12/2012 12:08:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Shans. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 6:57:00 AM
so true,whats the matter with the world is the world a fake,nothing wrong with the world its the people thats in it ,great write Shans
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shans PRIYA
Date: 7/16/2012 5:45:00 AM
thankx richard!!!