Are You Real

Open the eyes of wisdom
    and look at the world
Filled with people who are crazy
     it circles the sun


Pessimistic,optimistic,atheist,agnostic

Each one,each type
No one so ripe....

THIS IS A FAKE WORLD
THESE ARE FAKE SOULS

When you ring the winning bell
    it falls at your feet
When you slip and fall down
    darkness stays in your town

Your great,the best,superb,the chosen

Everyone says something
Long lasting is nothing....

THIS IS A FAKE WORLD
THESE ARE FAKE SOULS

They lock their tummy with greens
   Hunger in your eyes is not seen
Your shadow ignores your calls
    At the time when night falls

Why,how,isn't it,why not

You will have only questions
If you live on your conscience....

THIS IS A FAKE WORLD
THESE ARE FAKE SOULS
YOU TRY TO LIVE HERE
IT'S SURE YOU CAN'T BE REAL.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Me Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 12:52 AM
Hai really nice poem..
Cornwall Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:27 PM
enjoyed reading this lovely write...Patrick
Priya Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 5:45 AM
thanx pat!!!
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:08 PM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Shans. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
Palmer Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 6:57 AM
so true,whats the matter with the world is the world a fake,nothing wrong with the world its the people thats in it ,great write Shans
Priya Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 5:45 AM
thankx richard!!!
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