Are You Proud?

She hear your whispers
See your stares
You can't hurt her
Her soul already been destroyed
By the lies you tell 
Feels like she's been walking through hell
Feelings burned
Someone else is taking control of
Her mind
You did this to her
You have to live
With the choice you made
Are you proud about the fact
It's your daughter you betrayed
It's your daughter's soul 
That is left unclaimed.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Pawlak Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 1:56 PM
Very powerful peicefilled with lots of emotin.Good write.....Matt
Mac Donald Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 4:04 PM
Hey to you, Breana! This is a well written piece, though it is heart-wrenching; filled with loss and pain. I don't think that whoever was responsible for this, could possibly be proud. Hopefully some mending might occur..maybe a few bridges built? Perhaps it would be best to do what Christy has written, go out and seek this help...won't do any wrong to try. I wish for you happiness and great joys in your tomorrows...God bless you, Breana! Love to you...Mikki
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