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Are There Any of Us Left

The cruel streets I walked made me sad I looked not at him, nor at her Those who passed me by, gutter grads I felt at home among the curs We were outcasts from hearth and home Over the land our kind did roam. Looking here and then searching there As many as stars in the sky By foot, by car, sometimes by air We wanted to understand why We couldn't go back where we'd been Burned our bridges and that's a sin. Some were poets within their hearts A killer or two in the crowd And some were like me; a la carte Doing what it took to be proud Some chased women, some ran from them And in the melee some lost a gem. I sit here writing words of mine Wondering how many are left Who write words and sell for a dime I have escaped death's cold, cold theft I have fought the fight and I've won I'm old yes, but I've just begun

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Date: 12/7/2014 7:23:00 PM
This is wonderful write my friend, and there are many of us left more then you realize, I've been working on my book for almost five years. I don't want to sell out but want to leave this legacy as I see it as for my children and grand children as to remember me by. So you are not alone my friend, thank you for your comment on my farewell my friend poem.cheri
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Race Benoit
Date: 7/2/2018 11:12:00 AM
Such an outstanding response to my poem, cheri, it leaves me smiling. Thank you very, very much for your heartfelt(I hope) comments.
Date: 12/7/2014 11:31:00 AM
A wonderful write Race. Another Fav for me!
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Race Benoit
Date: 7/2/2018 11:21:00 AM
I much appreciate your kind words, Maurice. Thank you.
Date: 12/7/2014 9:24:00 AM
Endings are all about beginning. The thing about being older is that we have a big head start to our new beginning. I enjoyed observing humanity through your eyes.
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Date: 12/6/2014 7:56:00 PM
wow, this is VERY good and very deep . I love it. sends a message to all humanity. I want to fave this one!!
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Date: 9/19/2014 5:34:00 PM
Outstanding my friend.......There are plenty of words left...cheers Tim
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