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Are You Smiling

Spring,Sprang,Sprung
You stepped in elephant tung

Chip,clip,clasp
Oh how I did laugh

Fling,flang,flung
I fell in the elephant tung

Chip,clip,clasp
Now you did laugh

Now if it was just for a bit you heard
The joy from within my silly little words

I hope that upon your face
A big smile has been placed

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/4/2012 10:59:00 PM oh, my , I am clicking on everything and can't find a new one. I sure wish you had kept some of your oldies up for me to find, sweetie! And PLEASE get well soon. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 1/4/2012 11:38:00 AM It's a sweet blackmailing because it stared with laugh and ended with big smile. Thanks for giving this big smile to my face, my friend. bl Login to Reply

Ali Akl Date: 12/21/2011 8:51:00 AM Yes from my heart. I really enjoyed this poem, to be able to make someone smile with a poem is awesome. i congratulate you for this amazing ability :D Login to Reply

Jacque Graham Date: 11/17/2011 6:15:00 PM Loved it. And yes, it made me smile. :) Login to Reply

Nick Bagnall Date: 11/3/2011 8:06:00 AM Yes it has, nice lighthearted poem. Enjoyed. Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 11/1/2011 10:21:00 PM smiling. i didn't get what a tung meant first but then i did. and that's funny :D Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 11/1/2011 8:27:00 AM Interesting write, enjoyed it. Best of Luck in Brian Strand contest. Sure. bl Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 11/1/2011 6:51:00 AM funny....yes I am smiling and LOL!! needed a laugh today!! Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/30/2011 8:16:00 AM Delightful jesting Carol... I try to always smile...something that doesn't come easy for me... from a troubled childhood I suppose... though I use the extra effort and it has its own rewards I find. You have a beautiful rest of the weekend, sweet lady. Agape, Moses "Smile" Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/28/2011 11:00:00 PM Cute and whimsical one, Carol! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 10/28/2011 2:11:00 PM What a grandiose, loving, art piece of masterful combination, perfected, loving words! I had to smile at the wit within this poem!! You'll do well within the contest!! Login to Reply

Sarah Seraphin Date: 10/28/2011 1:39:00 PM * “Smiling * Loving * Wanting * Wanting * Loving * Smiling * Deeeply * Thank You * Sweet Beautiful Carol * Tis Nice to Walk Within The Peace of Light-Hearted * Luv * Sarah.” * Login to Reply