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Are You Smiling

Spring,Sprang,Sprung You stepped in elephant tung Chip,clip,clasp Oh how I did laugh Fling,flang,flung I fell in the elephant tung Chip,clip,clasp Now you did laugh Now if it was just for a bit you heard The joy from within my silly little words I hope that upon your face A big smile has been placed

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2012 10:59:00 PM

oh, my , I am clicking on everything and can't find a new one. I sure wish you had kept some of your oldies up for me to find, sweetie! And PLEASE get well soon.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/4/2012 11:38:00 AM

It's a sweet blackmailing because it stared with laugh and ended with big smile. Thanks for giving this big smile to my face, my friend. bl

Ali Akl

Date: 12/21/2011 8:51:00 AM

Yes from my heart. I really enjoyed this poem, to be able to make someone smile with a poem is awesome. i congratulate you for this amazing ability :D

Jacque Graham

Date: 11/17/2011 6:15:00 PM

Loved it. And yes, it made me smile. :)

Nick Bagnall

Date: 11/3/2011 8:06:00 AM

Yes it has, nice lighthearted poem. Enjoyed.

M.I.A .

Date: 11/1/2011 10:21:00 PM

smiling. i didn't get what a tung meant first but then i did. and that's funny :D

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/1/2011 8:27:00 AM

Interesting write, enjoyed it. Best of Luck in Brian Strand contest. Sure. bl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/1/2011 6:51:00 AM

funny....yes I am smiling and LOL!! needed a laugh today!!

John Freeman

Date: 10/30/2011 8:16:00 AM

Delightful jesting Carol... I try to always smile...something that doesn't come easy for me... from a troubled childhood I suppose... though I use the extra effort and it has its own rewards I find. You have a beautiful rest of the weekend, sweet lady. Agape, Moses "Smile"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2011 11:00:00 PM

Cute and whimsical one, Carol!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/28/2011 2:11:00 PM

What a grandiose, loving, art piece of masterful combination, perfected, loving words! I had to smile at the wit within this poem!! You'll do well within the contest!!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/28/2011 1:39:00 PM

* “Smiling * Loving * Wanting * Wanting * Loving * Smiling * Deeeply * Thank You * Sweet Beautiful Carol * Tis Nice to Walk Within The Peace of Light-Hearted * Luv * Sarah.” *