Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Couplet

Are You Smiling

Spring,Sprang,Sprung
You stepped in elephant tung

Chip,clip,clasp
Oh how I did laugh

Fling,flang,flung
I fell in the elephant tung

Chip,clip,clasp
Now you did laugh

Now if it was just for a bit you heard
The joy from within my silly little words

I hope that upon your face
A big smile has been placed

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Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2012 at 10:59 PM oh, my , I am clicking on everything and can't find a new one. I sure wish you had kept some of your oldies up for me to find, sweetie! And PLEASE get well soon.

Bl Devnath January 4, 2012 at 11:38 AM It's a sweet blackmailing because it stared with laugh and ended with big smile. Thanks for giving this big smile to my face, my friend. bl

Ali Akl December 21, 2011 at 8:51 AM Yes from my heart. I really enjoyed this poem, to be able to make someone smile with a poem is awesome. i congratulate you for this amazing ability :D

Jacque Graham November 17, 2011 at 6:15 PM Loved it. And yes, it made me smile. :)

Nick Bagnall November 3, 2011 at 8:06 AM Yes it has, nice lighthearted poem. Enjoyed.

M.I.A . November 1, 2011 at 10:21 PM smiling. i didn't get what a tung meant first but then i did. and that's funny :D

Bl Devnath November 1, 2011 at 8:27 AM Interesting write, enjoyed it. Best of Luck in Brian Strand contest. Sure. bl

Doris Culverhouse November 1, 2011 at 6:51 AM funny....yes I am smiling and LOL!! needed a laugh today!!

John Freeman October 30, 2011 at 8:16 AM Delightful jesting Carol... I try to always smile...something that doesn't come easy for me... from a troubled childhood I suppose... though I use the extra effort and it has its own rewards I find. You have a beautiful rest of the weekend, sweet lady. Agape, Moses "Smile"

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2011 at 11:00 PM Cute and whimsical one, Carol!

Russell Sivey October 28, 2011 at 2:11 PM What a grandiose, loving, art piece of masterful combination, perfected, loving words! I had to smile at the wit within this poem!! You'll do well within the contest!!

Sarah Seraphin October 28, 2011 at 1:39 PM * “Smiling * Loving * Wanting * Wanting * Loving * Smiling * Deeeply * Thank You * Sweet Beautiful Carol * Tis Nice to Walk Within The Peace of Light-Hearted * Luv * Sarah.” *