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Ardent Dreams

Adrift in a heartsome cloud, Rejoicing, learning to love after Deaf ears and saying good-bye. Ecstatic journey loving an enigma. Nestling comfortably within their bosom, To its labyrinth fathom needs. 5/23/2020 Poetry Contest: Double Double Words To Bubble Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/4/2020 5:03:00 AM

This is so beautiful Eve. Love the metaphors used for emotions. Congratulations on your win :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2020 7:51:00 AM

Very nicely rendered Eve, Congrats on your win

V. Deepa

Date: 6/3/2020 2:20:00 AM

Wow, Beautiful poem.Loved it mam Congratulations on your win:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/3/2020 12:21:00 AM

Ecstatic journey in the bosom of dreams. Lovely muse Eve. Congrats. Mohan

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/24/2020 10:14:00 AM

Eve, this is a fantastic example of how to write in this difficult form. Your lovely words are seamless! I'm a little intimidated to try...best of luck! xx Rhonda

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/24/2020 5:24:00 AM

Oh, my goodness! I was amazed when I realized that the ending letters were the second acrostic! Wow! WOW! WOWWWWWW! I am still in awe here.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/24/2020 2:50:00 AM

Wonderful way you composed this double acrostic poem..Good luck Eve..