Ardent Dreams

Adrift in a heartsome cloud,
Rejoicing, learning to love after 
Deaf ears and saying good-bye.
Ecstatic journey loving an enigma.
Nestling comfortably within their bosom, 
To its labyrinth fathom needs.


5/23/2020


Poetry Contest: Double Double Words To Bubble 
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 5:03 AM
This is so beautiful Eve. Love the metaphors used for emotions. Congratulations on your win :)
May Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Very nicely rendered Eve, Congrats on your win
Deepa Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 2:20 AM
Wow, Beautiful poem.Loved it mam Congratulations on your win:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
Chutani Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 12:21 AM
Ecstatic journey in the bosom of dreams. Lovely muse Eve. Congrats. Mohan
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Eve, this is a fantastic example of how to write in this difficult form. Your lovely words are seamless! I'm a little intimidated to try...best of luck! xx Rhonda
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May 24, 2020 at 5:24 AM
Oh, my goodness! I was amazed when I realized that the ending letters were the second acrostic! Wow! WOW! WOWWWWWW! I am still in awe here.
Somadas Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 2:50 AM
Wonderful way you composed this double acrostic poem..Good luck Eve..
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