Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

Archrival

1st verse

Unless I'm holding true
if I'm not loving on cue
I cannot function
I lie here with conjunction
woe I cannot fight this
I care as do I miss you

2nd verse

I imagine this almost constant
your words I'm glued to quadrant
though at times they're cruel
I've allowed you to rule
oh I wish I didn't
I love you as a sweet fondant

Chorus

I'm constantly waiting on your arrival
we're not on the same path of survival
I can't even form a sentence
you've got me in repentance
so I'll continue longing
for you my arch-rival

Chorus (repeat)

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Lindsay Laurie December 8, 2020 at 5:03 PM Hello Angela … a fine lyric indeed Angela. You could do well with this write - well done - Lindsay Angela Crabtree December 9, 2020 at 9:00 AM Thank you :)

Akkina Downing December 8, 2020 at 4:45 PM Oh yeah me too, I would love to hear it too. It’s perfectly written, Angela, I loved it :) Angela Crabtree December 9, 2020 at 8:59 AM Thank you :)

Caren Krutsinger December 6, 2020 at 6:52 PM I would like to hear this in a sound bite Angela. Angela Crabtree December 9, 2020 at 8:59 AM Thank you :)

Paul Callus December 5, 2020 at 8:09 AM Quite a lovely poem with a creative title, Angela. Longing can be so sad! ~ Regards // paul Angela Crabtree December 5, 2020 at 3:19 PM Thank you, Paul :)

Victor Buhagiar December 5, 2020 at 7:34 AM Seems a tad sad to me, but what a lovely write. You have a knack of getting our attention. ~~ Angela Crabtree December 5, 2020 at 3:19 PM Thank you, Victor. I try :)

Vijay Pandit December 5, 2020 at 6:03 AM Bittersweet memories come to surface--reflective write, Angela. Angela Crabtree December 5, 2020 at 3:18 PM Thank you, Vijay :)

Silent One December 5, 2020 at 3:30 AM Sounds like a nice song Angela... Will you sing it? Angela Crabtree December 5, 2020 at 3:18 PM Thank you, Silent One. Actually, I'd prefer if someone else sang it. I used to do my own demos years ago, but not anymore :)