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Arabian Jasmine

arabian jasmine the little flowers sweet scented open at night close in the morning 1/7/22 Haiku Contest Inspired By Basho Only Poetry Damned I-Be Checked: How Many Syllables PS Syllable Counter

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/8/2022 11:03:00 AM

Just like a wife . . . .

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/8/2022 11:52:00 AM

Ha-ha-ha... nutty head! Thanks for making me laugh.... Have a great weekend.. Aloha!

Deb M

Date: 1/7/2022 7:00:00 PM

Hi Marilene….a sweet simple lovely poem! Debx

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/7/2022 7:17:00 PM

Hello, Deb! Thanks... Have a great week-end. Stay safe and be safe... Blessings to you.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/7/2022 2:38:00 PM

Perfect in syllable, subject matter! and fragrant imagery beautiful! Best wishes in the contest. Thanks - Marshall

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/7/2022 4:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Marshall and thanks for visiting. Have a great week-end. Happy New Year.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/7/2022 1:42:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Marilene. Best wishes in the contest. Happy Weekend...hugs

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/7/2022 1:53:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie! Appreciate it. What week-end? Everyday is a weekend for me cause I'm retired... lol... Have a great week-end! Hugs...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2022 1:15:00 PM

- I love this, Marilene ... (I posted one to this contest ... but really hard to understand ... after his blog I deleted mine for the contest ... I changed mine to a 5-7-5 haiku .. . :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/7/2022 1:31:00 PM

Hello, Anne-Lise. Happy New Year! Thanks for visiting. Blessings you and Be Safe and Stay Safe. Hugs, Marilene