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Aquatic Stories

Oceanic tales,
Paragraphs of vivid waves:
Novels of the sea.

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Doris Culverhouse

February 25, 2010 at 5:51 AM

I like the way you compare ocean to writing. Great work!!

Sara Kendrick

February 24, 2010 at 2:37 PM

Wow! Now if I could just create a Novel Of The Sea and it sell. Great thinking on this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2010 at 3:17 PM

What an awesome analogy, likening the ocean tales to "paragraphs of vivid waves" that is a most striking line! LUv, Andrea

Susan Palli

February 22, 2010 at 12:43 PM

exquisite

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 21, 2010 at 4:58 PM

A nice Haiku Raul... very visual and vivid .. luv your words ... thankxxx for this new contest.. photo is awesome... another challenge accepted... thankxxx... luv.. Linda-Marie