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Aquatic Presence

Impressions of mist,
Condensation fingerprints;
Traces of moisture.

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Karla Null

Date: 8/4/2009 9:03:00 PM

You get the point across, soooo well...Karla

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2009 9:51:00 AM

Good afternoon Raul. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku poem today. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/4/2009 4:11:00 AM

condensation fingerprints-i love this line,great Haiku--charma

Nathan Leccese

Date: 8/4/2009 3:00:00 AM

wow...what else can I say about this one. God I missed reading your Haiku's Raul. Nate

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/3/2009 9:02:00 PM

Raul I like this haiku for it captures something we all see everyday in one way or another in a very original way - God Bless you Raul, MJ

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/3/2009 8:46:00 PM

Perfection my friend, from the title to each emotional line! You are the master of the Haiku form!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/3/2009 7:58:00 PM

(forgot to fav it in my excitement!)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/3/2009 7:57:00 PM

longing, lost love, just beginning to feel the cloud descend....goodness Raul, you allow the reader to go on forever!!! in their own personal direction!...how do you create such magic!!!???....that's poetry!!! unrealexcellente'.... Jimmy, proud member of the 'Raul Moreno Fan Club'

Aquatic Presence

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