Aquatic Presence

Impressions of mist,
Condensation fingerprints;
Traces of moisture.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 4, 2009 at 9:03 PM
You get the point across, soooo well...Karla
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August 4, 2009 at 9:51 AM
Good afternoon Raul. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku poem today. Love, Carol
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August 4, 2009 at 4:11 AM
condensation fingerprints-i love this line,great Haiku--charma
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August 4, 2009 at 3:00 AM
wow...what else can I say about this one. God I missed reading your Haiku's Raul. Nate
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August 3, 2009 at 9:02 PM
Raul I like this haiku for it captures something we all see everyday in one way or another in a very original way - God Bless you Raul, MJ
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August 3, 2009 at 8:46 PM
Perfection my friend, from the title to each emotional line! You are the master of the Haiku form!
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August 3, 2009 at 7:58 PM
(forgot to fav it in my excitement!)
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August 3, 2009 at 7:57 PM
longing, lost love, just beginning to feel the cloud descend....goodness Raul, you allow the reader to go on forever!!! in their own personal direction!...how do you create such magic!!!???....that's poetry!!! unrealexcellente'.... Jimmy, proud member of the 'Raul Moreno Fan Club'
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